tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7850978732318782266.post4472622275076889691..comments2023-10-18T10:12:41.056-05:00Comments on Anthony's Blog: Storytelling for Week 11: Beowulf in HeavenAnthony Clarkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16287279935923856704noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7850978732318782266.post-15378891040400561032014-11-02T17:29:30.005-06:002014-11-02T17:29:30.005-06:00It's a cool idea to take a story and fill in t...It's a cool idea to take a story and fill in the sections that you had questions about with your imagination. Overall, I thought your story was very informative. But because it was just Beowulf speaking the entire time, it felt a little one-sided. There were also quite a few typos. So I would suggest going over it again to proofread it. This sentence in particular needs some TLC: "After my parents send me away to my live with my uncle I had to underdo serious training from day one." Otherwise, good job!Alissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09944369196099005788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7850978732318782266.post-52747750497071381962014-11-01T21:29:17.800-05:002014-11-01T21:29:17.800-05:00Hi again, firstly I would like to say what a great...Hi again, firstly I would like to say what a great choice for an image to complement your work. I think that you did a great job in making this story yours. I have heard about the story but can’t really remember the detail of it. I think it was very creative of you to write about the time period in between the actual story. Good for you and well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04927588131108949965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7850978732318782266.post-57721749083567635832014-10-31T14:47:01.833-05:002014-10-31T14:47:01.833-05:00Hey Anthony! I think that it's great that you ...Hey Anthony! I think that it's great that you based your storytelling post this week off of what your imagination created for the missing time we see in this story of Beowulf! With all of the stories that we read in the class being so short, we are often left with a lot of unanswered questions and missing details. This makes the story retelling part a lot easier, however, because we get to create what is missing! Anyways, wonderful job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10077994194821802205noreply@blogger.com